your speaking skills were off and you can tell in the way where you shuffle your feet and shake a lot the can be improvement there and not holding on one topic for too long use various topics to get the reader intrigued
1) I wasn't super prepared. I had only practiced twice and I even noticed myself saying um. Terrible habit I need to break. 2) I feel I did I good job on my writing, but I accidently put my opinion into the article, which made the PLN even harder to write. 3) The world would be utter craziness. We wouldn't know how to do our jobs, how to live our lives. We would be no where without teachers.
Speaking Skills: Good. You spoke loud and naturally and looked at your audience often. I could hear you, it flowed well and you didn't rely on your note cards which is good.
Content: Good. I thought it was cool how you wrote your own article and used that, that must've taken a while but it worked well and I thought it was really cool.
Question: It would be chaotic. Nobody would know very much other than things that you learn in the real world, but even then that wouldn't be enough for us to live. People wouldn't know what to do with themselves and what to do with their lives. The world would be filled with violence and it wouldn't be good.
Speaking skills: Your voice was loud enough and clear so that everyone could hear you. You made eye contact but you also kept messing with your hair. Content: I couldnt really tell when you spoke about your topic sentence but overall it was pretty good. Question: I think the world would just have more people that are uneducated and there would be less people that find ways to become succesful in life.
Speaking: You had good volume and made eye contact and you didn't just read off the note card. there were some pauses where you had to find you place but not many. Content: Your response had a lot of opinion and information in it. I couldn't tell really when you switched from summary to response, but your summary seemed kind of short. Question:If teachers were never hired then our parents would just teach us everyrtthing
speaking skills- It was loud and clearly stated. At the beginning you were too depending on the notecard but as you went on, it was good!
Content- It was good to have your own article for PLN. It was interesting and clearly you have stated your opinion and facts.
Question- if the teachers had never been hired and we never had school, people would be uneducated and uninformed. Plus we would never have jobs nor earn money.
Your content was well organized because you went off topic towards the end with cutting the fund for the football players and giving it to the teachers. You speaking skills were good but it was hard to hear.
Question: What I think will happen if we had no teachers or school that we wouldn't of advanced as mankind is today. We would have more street smarts than book smarts.
Speaking Skills: Great skills, no stuttering and you made eye contact a lot and didn't look at the board at all. Content: Awesome blog, you brought up a lot of good points and it all flowed together, I understood it all. Answer to the Question: If teachers had never been hired in the world, I think that we would be nothing but a stupid nation. We wouldn't know how to do anything.
Speaking: You spoke loud and clear, but you stuttered and lost your place a few times. I think you could have made more eye contact, you didn't really look at us, you looked at the back of the room and Mrs.B.
Content: I had a little trouble telling what was your response and what was your summary, it seemed you included your opinion both in your summary and response.
Question Answer: I think the world would be more at peace, everyone would almost be at the same level of intelligence, kids wouldn't be smarter than others. But then it would be harder to get good jobs such as lawyers that require tons of intelligence.
Speaking-I think you had very good speaking skills and you looked at the audience and you sounded very natural not like you were reading something.
Content-I think you should've explained more in your summary. I like how you personalized it.
Question- I think the world would be uneducated unless if they were interested in learning on your own. I think entertainment would be bigger if we didn't have school.
Speaking Skills: I think that you did a good job with the way you spoke loud enough for the class to hear you. You stuttered a bit but recovered quickly. You made good eye contact and made sure that everyone understood what was being said. Good presentation.
I believe that if we had no teachers then the world would not be very smart and we would fall apart.
speaking skills: You did a pretty good job speaking, you spoke loud enough that i could hear you and you spoke clear, although you did studder a few times. Content: Your content of your speech was made very well, everything made sense and you stayed on topic, it was welly written. Question: i think that the world would be all about sports...more than it already is.
I think the world would be turmoil. i say this cause teachers teach to be respectful and howto get through the world. You did very good and i think you were well prepared and you could not have done too much of a better job.
Sarah said her topic well and sure did fight for it, she was debating that teachers should get more pay because of their hard work, and what football players make is just too much. She did say um a lot, but thats OK. She faced us and that was great and spoke loud. Overall it was very well said.
The world would be dumb. We would not know anything.
Speaking: You did a really good job on making eye contact not looking at your paper too much and you not once looked at the screen. You made each word loud and clear and did a really nice job. Content: I don't understand why you would do your own article but that's just me. I thought that you could have put way more into the actual summary writing, instead of just giving us an over view of what the article says you should have told us what you wrote and facts of it. Answer: I'm not sure the world would be really stupid and like not know anything but I don't think that we would be able to survive really.
During your presentation you did a good job of projecting your voice, and having emotion. It didn't seem like you read off the cards. You looked at them to help you find your place and then spoke to us about how u felt. The content was really good. You had strong points to back up your opinion. You even brought up the other side of the argument then shot it down. To answer the question I think the world would be very different. People wouldn't be educated and new ideas and technology would never be produced. I think it would be a hard place to live.
I think that you kind of skipped over your summary paragraph. you did a great job speaking, and you had very good content in it overall. you seemed a little bit jumpy while you where reading it, but i know how hard it is to go up there and speak too.
The world of today would not be as advanced without teachers and school. it would be ruled by the people that are smart, who will have control over the "dumb." anarchy
You spoke loudly and clearly and also made eye contact. You did not look at the board very much. I loved the article cause to me it also makes a lot of sense. You did an excellent job responding to how you felt about the article. However you did not summarize the article as much as I think you should have. It would help to summarize more because that way we would understand the point you were trying to prove in your response. If teachers were not around many people today are successful and it is partly due to teachers.
Speaking Skills: Sarah! You did a wonderful job. You made frequent eye contact with the audience, you spoke in the perfect tone, and you spoke clearly. You didn't seem nervous at all, which indicates that your were prepared! I did notice that you played with your hair a few times, which is understandable because I saw it kept falling in your face and it was being a pain! Overall, EXCELLENT job.
Content: I thought your presentation was brilliant. It was really creative of you to write an article yourself and then present about it. You definitely knew what you were talking about and you really do care about what you said. You made many good points to me that I honestly had never though about before, thank you. Your information was thoughtful and clear!'
Question: If teachers had never been hired, I think the world would be really disorganized. As Sarah stated, teachers teach us our jobs and they put so much work into what they do. People wouldn't now how to operate in a certain working environment. I want to be a teacher and I can't really imagine a world without them!
Speaking Skills: Your speaking skills where great and almost perfect. You messed up only once.
Content: The content on your presentation was really good I like how much detail you put into it like how much teachers get paid compared to football players. Question: If there where not teachers we would all be stupid and we would not know anything.
Great job Sarah! I thought your speaking skills were fantastic, you put a lot of heart and passion into your presentation which made it interesting to listen to, I enjoyed it. You spoke with confidence and courage, I enjoyed how you showed the audience how much you care about your topic. The content of your writing was very proficient as well, I understood the article and your opinion clearly. I believe that football players could not perform without teachers. Therefore, without teachers, we would not have football so teachers should be paid more!
Speaking skills: You seemed into the topic, and engaged, but you lost your place a couple of times, and played with your hair sometimes.
content: I agree, Teachers should get paid more, but I wouldn't hate on the football players, they don't just sit on their butts all day they practice for a game.
Question: I think the world would be a mess, because teachers teach us everything that we need to know, and they teach us to step out of our box.
your speaking skills were off and you can tell in the way where you shuffle your feet and shake a lot the can be improvement there and not holding on one topic for too long use various topics to get the reader intrigued
ReplyDeleteit would be like my peoples time :D
1) I wasn't super prepared. I had only practiced twice and I even noticed myself saying um. Terrible habit I need to break.
ReplyDelete2) I feel I did I good job on my writing, but I accidently put my opinion into the article, which made the PLN even harder to write.
3) The world would be utter craziness. We wouldn't know how to do our jobs, how to live our lives. We would be no where without teachers.
Speaking Skills: Good. You spoke loud and naturally and looked at your audience often. I could hear you, it flowed well and you didn't rely on your note cards which is good.
ReplyDeleteContent: Good. I thought it was cool how you wrote your own article and used that, that must've taken a while but it worked well and I thought it was really cool.
Question: It would be chaotic. Nobody would know very much other than things that you learn in the real world, but even then that wouldn't be enough for us to live. People wouldn't know what to do with themselves and what to do with their lives. The world would be filled with violence and it wouldn't be good.
Speaking skills: Your voice was loud enough and clear so that everyone could hear you. You made eye contact but you also kept messing with your hair.
ReplyDeleteContent: I couldnt really tell when you spoke about your topic sentence but overall it was pretty good.
Question: I think the world would just have more people that are uneducated and there would be less people that find ways to become succesful in life.
Speaking: You had good volume and made eye contact and you didn't just read off the note card. there were some pauses where you had to find you place but not many. Content: Your response had a lot of opinion and information in it. I couldn't tell really when you switched from summary to response, but your summary seemed kind of short. Question:If teachers were never hired then our parents would just teach us everyrtthing
ReplyDeletespeaking skills- It was loud and clearly stated. At the beginning you were too depending on the notecard but as you went on, it was good!
ReplyDeleteContent- It was good to have your own article for PLN. It was interesting and clearly you have stated your opinion and facts.
Question- if the teachers had never been hired and we never had school, people would be uneducated and uninformed. Plus we would never have jobs nor earn money.
Your content was well organized because you went off topic towards the end with cutting the fund for the football players and giving it to the teachers. You speaking skills were good but it was hard to hear.
ReplyDeleteQuestion: What I think will happen if we had no teachers or school that we wouldn't of advanced as mankind is today. We would have more street smarts than book smarts.
Speaking Skills: Great skills, no stuttering and you made eye contact a lot and didn't look at the board at all.
ReplyDeleteContent: Awesome blog, you brought up a lot of good points and it all flowed together, I understood it all.
Answer to the Question: If teachers had never been hired in the world, I think that we would be nothing but a stupid nation. We wouldn't know how to do anything.
Speaking: You spoke loud and clear, but you stuttered and lost your place a few times. I think you could have made more eye contact, you didn't really look at us, you looked at the back of the room and Mrs.B.
ReplyDeleteContent: I had a little trouble telling what was your response and what was your summary, it seemed you included your opinion both in your summary and response.
Question Answer: I think the world would be more at peace, everyone would almost be at the same level of intelligence, kids wouldn't be smarter than others. But then it would be harder to get good jobs such as lawyers that require tons of intelligence.
Speaking-I think you had very good speaking skills and you looked at the audience and you sounded very natural not like you were reading something.
ReplyDeleteContent-I think you should've explained more in your summary. I like how you personalized it.
Question- I think the world would be uneducated unless if they were interested in learning on your own. I think entertainment would be bigger if we didn't have school.
Speaking Skills: I think that you did a good job with the way you spoke loud enough for the class to hear you. You stuttered a bit but recovered quickly. You made good eye contact and made sure that everyone understood what was being said. Good presentation.
ReplyDeleteI believe that if we had no teachers then the world would not be very smart and we would fall apart.
speaking skills: You did a pretty good job speaking, you spoke loud enough that i could hear you and you spoke clear, although you did studder a few times.
ReplyDeleteContent: Your content of your speech was made very well, everything made sense and you stayed on topic, it was welly written.
Question: i think that the world would be all about sports...more than it already is.
I think the world would be turmoil. i say this cause teachers teach to be respectful and howto get through the world. You did very good and i think you were well prepared and you could not have done too much of a better job.
ReplyDeleteSarah said her topic well and sure did fight for it, she was debating that teachers should get more pay because of their hard work, and what football players make is just too much. She did say um a lot, but thats OK. She faced us and that was great and spoke loud. Overall it was very well said.
ReplyDeleteThe world would be dumb. We would not know anything.
Speaking: You did a really good job on making eye contact not looking at your paper too much and you not once looked at the screen. You made each word loud and clear and did a really nice job.
ReplyDeleteContent: I don't understand why you would do your own article but that's just me. I thought that you could have put way more into the actual summary writing, instead of just giving us an over view of what the article says you should have told us what you wrote and facts of it.
Answer: I'm not sure the world would be really stupid and like not know anything but I don't think that we would be able to survive really.
During your presentation you did a good job of projecting your voice, and having emotion. It didn't seem like you read off the cards. You looked at them to help you find your place and then spoke to us about how u felt. The content was really good. You had strong points to back up your opinion. You even brought up the other side of the argument then shot it down.
ReplyDeleteTo answer the question I think the world would be very different. People wouldn't be educated and new ideas and technology would never be produced. I think it would be a hard place to live.
I think that you kind of skipped over your summary paragraph. you did a great job speaking, and you had very good content in it overall. you seemed a little bit jumpy while you where reading it, but i know how hard it is to go up there and speak too.
ReplyDeleteThe world of today would not be as advanced without teachers and school. it would be ruled by the people that are smart, who will have control over the "dumb." anarchy
You spoke loudly and clearly and also made eye contact. You did not look at the board very much. I loved the article cause to me it also makes a lot of sense. You did an excellent job responding to how you felt about the article. However you did not summarize the article as much as I think you should have. It would help to summarize more because that way we would understand the point you were trying to prove in your response. If teachers were not around many people today are successful and it is partly due to teachers.
ReplyDeleteSpeaking Skills: Sarah! You did a wonderful job. You made frequent eye contact with the audience, you spoke in the perfect tone, and you spoke clearly. You didn't seem nervous at all, which indicates that your were prepared! I did notice that you played with your hair a few times, which is understandable because I saw it kept falling in your face and it was being a pain! Overall, EXCELLENT job.
ReplyDeleteContent: I thought your presentation was brilliant. It was really creative of you to write an article yourself and then present about it. You definitely knew what you were talking about and you really do care about what you said. You made many good points to me that I honestly had never though about before, thank you. Your information was thoughtful and clear!'
Question: If teachers had never been hired, I think the world would be really disorganized. As Sarah stated, teachers teach us our jobs and they put so much work into what they do. People wouldn't now how to operate in a certain working environment. I want to be a teacher and I can't really imagine a world without them!
Speaking Skills:
ReplyDeleteYour speaking skills where great and almost perfect. You messed up only once.
Content:
The content on your presentation was really good I like how much detail you put into it like how much teachers get paid compared to football players.
Question:
If there where not teachers we would all be stupid and we would not know anything.
Great job Sarah! I thought your speaking skills were fantastic, you put a lot of heart and passion into your presentation which made it interesting to listen to, I enjoyed it. You spoke with confidence and courage, I enjoyed how you showed the audience how much you care about your topic. The content of your writing was very proficient as well, I understood the article and your opinion clearly. I believe that football players could not perform without teachers. Therefore, without teachers, we would not have football so teachers should be paid more!
ReplyDeleteSpeaking skills: You seemed into the topic, and engaged, but you lost your place a couple of times, and played with your hair sometimes.
ReplyDeletecontent: I agree, Teachers should get paid more, but I wouldn't hate on the football players, they don't just sit on their butts all day they practice for a game.
Question: I think the world would be a mess, because teachers teach us everything that we need to know, and they teach us to step out of our box.